Ficlet:Verisimilitude

callmelyss:

For @huxloween day 3: scary stories by the campfire.

Verisimilitude (730 words)

“—then the five kids ran out into the cornfield,” Armitage says, leaning toward the campfire, letting it throw flickering shadows across his face for effect. “You know, like the idiots.”

“Editorializing, Armie,” Rey interrupts. His little sister is sitting across him, drowning in one of his old hoodies, the sleeves pulled over her hands. Her best friends, Finn and Rose, are seated on either of side of her, round-eyed and rapt.

“It is stupid running out into the dark instead of contacting the authorities,” Armitage insists, but continues. “They pushed through the stalks, deep into the field until they’d completely lost their bearings.” Dumbasses.

“Now your face is editorializing.” Rey glares at him. “Get on with it.”

And it’s a joint party, as their stepmother insisted, his friends and hers, except she has several more of those, despite being only a sophomore: Finn, Rose, Paige, Poe, and J.P. are all here for Rey. Only Phasma and Dopheld are here for him. But whatever; he has a surprise planned.

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jinxedambitions:

We’ll Always Have Venice

By JinxedAmbitions

SummaryRomance. That was always what people thought of when they thought of Venice. Romantic gondola rides. Catching a glimpse of your lover from across the Piazza San Marco. Sharing a quiet moment at an outdoor cafe beside the Grand Canal. The seduction and allure of Carnivale. Venice was romance built of stone and dreams.

Hux, however, was a realist. Venice was sinking. At high tide, one had best be wearing Wellingtons or else sacrifice their footwear to the sea. Dreams and romance simply did not withstand the test of time. Hux knew this and so too did the architecture of Venice, slowly sinking into the sea with each passing tide. And now Hux too was sinking with one Kylo Ren at his side.

This wasn’t a fairytale romance, and Hux would just as soon throw himself into the Grand Canal as admit what he might be feeling was love…but if the city was sinking anyway, he was certainly going to get wet, so maybe it was time to stop lying to himself.

Notes: Written for Kinktober 2018

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Meta Monday

fangirlunderground:

This will be my third Meta Monday on the topic of comments, but this time the focus is less on encouraging comments and more about discouraging them… the unsolicited critical ones, that is. 

And, I know, some fanfic readers hate the idea that you not only must leave comments, but that those comments must be positive. We’ve probably all seen well-intentioned posts asking questions like “how will the author improve?” when (I feel) the better question is “why do I think my feedback will help?”

Some authors welcome concrit, and that’s great! Those authors will make that very clear in their notes, and they’ll probably adore you for your thorough review! But, to everyone else, those helpful suggestions are coming from someone the author has no reason to trust, long after the story is finished, in a public space where everyone can see. At best, your feedback might be a nuisance, but at worst, you could undermine the writer’s confidence — a real person who’s age, experience, primary language, wellbeing, and circumstances you probably know nothing about — and turn them off writing for good.  

After all, the one thing that will always improve writing is practice. If the goal is really to help, isn’t encouragement the best way to go about it? 

Check out these posts for a much more in-depth take on this topic, and make sure to let them know you appreciate their thoughts with likes and reblogs! If you’re someone who is struggling with a negative comment on your writing, I have to recommend two pieces of advice I found on @ao3commentoftheday here and here. 💛

Fandom – Commenting vs. Criticism

5 reasons to ignore unsolicited “constructive” criticism by @gingertodgers, I keep seeing posts about how fanfic writers should be open to unsolicited criticism + how without it we’ll never improve, will eventually die from the lack of oxygen in our happy fandom bubbles, etc. Thing is, that’s bollocks. There is 1 (one) situation where you should listen to unsolicited “constructive” criticism and 5 reasons to ignore it. (Mirror Link)

Fanfic Etiquette by @starknjarvis27, […] You’re not a copy editor. Unless the writer asks for feedback, don’t waste a review nitpicking typos. This is free content, and you’re nobody. Either stop reading the fic or accept people make mistakes and move on. (Mirror Link)

Just don’t (criticize) by @porcupine-girl, […] I just passed by a post about how fic writers should welcome criticism in comments because friends who beta your fic aren’t experts. Setting aside the fact that I could easily have every fic beta’d by English PhDs and professional writers if I wanted (some fandoms are crawling with them)…. you know who really isn’t an expert, in my experience? Random assholes commenting on my fic. (Mirror Link)

So you’re thinking about leaving concrit on a fanfiction… by @dresupi, […] Wait WHAT? Dres…you’re telling me I shouldn’t alert this writer to their grave error in judgement (Or grammar, or characterization, or anything else I deem incorrect in this work they’ve posted out in public for everyone to see?) Yes, imaginary fic commenter. Yes, that’s exactly what I’m telling you. (Mirror Link)

To critique or not to critique (of the unsolicited kind) by @tarysande, […] Unsolicited criticism is not helpful. Maybe you just catch someone off-guard and startle them. At worst, you may totally shatter someone’s self-esteem while they are partaking in a hobby they 100% do for fun—and not in pursuit of some unattainable perfection. (Mirror Link)

[DISCUSSION] Unpopular Opinion – Reflections on a culture of nice in ficdom by @rashaka, @missdaviswrites​, @destinationtoast, et al. […] AO3 is not a workshop. People are not posting multiple drafts hoping to improve and revise. Trust me, even people posting WIPs as they write them are giving you the most polished version of each chapter they can. When they say, “Here is my very best effort. I hope you like it,” they don’t need to hear about what’s wrong with it, especially not in a public place where everyone else can see the criticism. Think of the works on AO3 as finished products, and save your criticism for other environments. (Mirror Link)

Unsolicited Opinions on Fic Criticism by @shinelikethunder, […] You are not doing random authors a favor by informing them what’s “wrong” with their fic. If you choose to go that route, and to go there with someone who doesn’t have an explicit “con crit welcome” policy, you gotta operate under the assumption that unsolicited negative feedback is a squirm-inducing imposition you’re asking the author to tolerate. (Mirror Link)

Why shouldn’t anyone leave any kind of comments they like on a fic? by @ali-aliska​​ & @reioka​, […] You can leave whatever feedback you want, but why make it negative? Ask who’s benefiting from that because so far, it hasn’t been me. I have a lot of reasons for writing, but my main reason for sharing my work, aside from a communal experience of loving my faves? I’ll be completely honest, it is to get positive feedback that motivates me to write more. Why shouldn’t that be a valid reason? If everything was just about that ephemeral pleasure of creation via writing, I’d write, then close the word doc, move on, and never let my work see the light of day. (Mirror Link)

We’ll Always Have Venice

ao3feed–kylux:

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Romance. That was always what people thought of when they thought of Venice. Romantic gondola rides. Catching a glimpse of your lover from across the Piazza San Marco. Sharing a quiet moment at an outdoor cafe beside the Grand Canal. The seduction and allure of Carnivale. Venice was romance built of stone and dreams.

Hux, however, was a realist. Venice was sinking. At high tide, one had best be wearing Wellingtons or else sacrifice their footwear to the sea. Dreams and romance simply did not withstand the test of time. Hux knew this and so too did the architecture of Venice, slowly sinking into the sea with each passing tide. And now Hux too was sinking with one Kylo Ren at his side.

This wasn’t a fairytale romance, and Hux would just as soon throw himself into the Grand Canal as admit what he might be feeling was love…but if the city was sinking anyway, he was certainly going to get wet, so maybe it was time to stop lying to himself.

Words: 4801, Chapters: 1/?, Language: English

Series: Part 2 of Off the Rails

read it on the AO3 at https://ift.tt/2ygkJGS

Second Spring, First Fall

ao3feed–kylux:

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Nothing brings people together quite like the holidays. Well, maybe not Halloween… After a scare, Hux has to confront his neighbor. Lucky for him, Kylo might be a little sweeter than his tricks let on.

Words: 1015, Chapters: 1/?, Language: English

read it on the AO3 at https://ift.tt/2y6L9Lk

spacewitchqueen:

Huxloween 2018 – Fall Decor: My Pumpkin

I’m going to try to do as many @huxloween prompts as I can, even if it’s just a very small drabble 🎃

Hux has always had mixed feelings about Fall. He loves the weather, he likes that he can wear his favorite clothes; he is fascinated by the trees, an explosion of orange, brown and gold; he says he doesn’t care much for the festivities -but he always has a costume to show off.

What he really doesn’t like is when some random person, a complete stranger makes a comment about how his hair is just “a perfect shade of Halloween orange!” Like he can help that. He hated it as a child and he certainly detests it now.

But now, Kylo is running around the house, excited because he’s finally allowed to bring out all the Halloween paraphernalia he has. This will be their first Halloween together. Kylo is busy putting up a couple of felt bats by the window, paper ghosts everywhere.

Hux pretends he is annoyed when Kylo asks “what do you think, Pumpkin?” and ruffles his hair, but he doesn’t really mind. He’s more than happy to be his Pumpkin.

“Very thorough, you put up some spiderwebs too.” Hux is admiring Kylo’s handiwork on the corner of a wall.

“I didn’t.”

“Then clean that up and get that spider out of this house right now!” Hux screams and runs to a spiderless room. This pumpkin does not like eight-legged critters, thank you very much.